GIVE THE GAME A MINUTE TO LOAD. VN MAKER DOES NOT CURRENTLY SUPPORT A PERSISTENT LOADING SCREEN BETWEEN SCENES.
It is possible the web version might not run altogether, or run slowly for you, in which case I have provided Windows and OSX versions for you to download instead!
They should be playable once you unzip and export them, then run the executable. If you don't know how to do that, uh, I dunno what to tell you. If you know you've done everything right and it's still not running, lemme know
EDIT: Weird, when I attempted uploading an Android build earlier (which I haven't finished because I have no idea how to make that an install package) it replaced the Windows file. Anyway, it should be working correctly now.
EDIT EDIT: I THINK the OSX files should now work on more versions of OSX, and a Linux build has been added but I have zero idea if it works or not.